User blog:Chris Lang/Traitor Game VII Galaxy - Part 15 of Traitor Game Essentials

And now Part 15 of the Traitor Game Essentials re-presentation of Traitor Game VII: A Galaxy, Far, Far Away. In this installment, Darth Jubba travels the Multiverse (and proves Willow wrong on a certain point), Cologne and Willow discuss the Traitor Games, and some new developments ensue.

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RUMINATIONS: Well, that question will be answered in the next installment.

And so Darth Jubba travels to the worlds he intends to take over. I had fun writing the bit where he proves to Willow that he CAN jaywalk after all -- or is it jayslither?

In any case, I felt those bits were needed so that everyone knows just what's at stake here. A common writing axiom is 'show, don't tell'. Though one doesn't always has to follow that, the meaning of that axiom is that in many cases showing what's going on can be more effective than just telling. Here, we actually see Darth Jubba appearing in the worlds he intends to take over, and I felt that was more effective than just saying that 'He's out to expand his operations throughout the Multiverse'.

And we get a cameo from the previous game's main antagonist. How Doom knew that there was a Traitor Game going on and how he knew where to reach Cologne and the others is never explained, but I guess The Purple Skull is going for the Rule of Funny here.

As for the sandstorm going on outside, it has a purpose that'll be revealed when we get to the next round. The re-presentation continues in Part 16.

Beginning of the game: Page One, Page Two

The last few pages: Page Eleven, Page Twelve, Page Thirteen,  Page Fourteen

The re-presentation continues in Page Sixteen.